Sunday, January 29, 2006
timeintotime
"i'll meet you," she said. "at the bus stop, one tuesday."
"how would i know?" he asked.
"you'd know. my hair, my eyes, my lips, my skin would make the world fall tenderly around you from two blocks away."
it's been years now, and the books she sent you had long tired themselves out making love with the dust bunnies under your bed. you've called her name more than a few times since, but only ended up waking the ghost of her imagined taste in your mouth. and you curse in english and a smattering of other languages you've picked up along the way. your tavern cursing always made her laugh.
it's six in the morning. time to walk her out of your system again. maybe you'll take that book on hentai she found so gloriously entertaining. you could never get that about her. but okay, you'll take her book out for some fresh air today.
you turn your collar up against the chill of old, familiar things. there's the baptist church. the school. the diner where you could always get them big-ass breakfasts. oh, the avenue with its hint of eternal autumn. and later, further on, the bus stop.
(you're dreading it already.)
"god, but my world is small," you say. and you gently finger the spine of the book in your hand as if it were her spine you were touching.
you don't know how to let go, really. every moment is marked with this and that of her. your best friend, probably with the best of intentions, says earnestly, "go out and fuck, man. i'd fix you up with somebody. you have to let me help you." as if you were some kind of crazy with no common sense to speak of. you don't tell him how you've fucked five different women in three days. all of them drop-dead gorgeous in their respective parts of the world. all of them not her. sure, it helped quiet the demons for a while.
anyway, here's the bus stop. here's where time stands still. for you, it would always be tuesday in these parts.
(bus 21892 boarding.)
and you think, maybe it'll be different today. maybe, you wouldn't let me walk by because you thought it would go nowhere. maybe you would make the world fall tenderly around me from two blocks away. or even from one block away. okay, how about half a block? don't make me grovel, sweetheart. please, don't. i can love you so much better than this.
and damn it, somebody manages to interrupt your sad little monologue. "may i have the time?"
you say, even without looking at your watch, "it's 6:45. well, i could be off for a few minutes or so, but i'm pretty sure that's accurate."
"thanks."
you look away from the beautiful stranger and turn your face up to the sky, that lovely blue suicide poem. you think of how you would lay her down under that sky, how you would take everything of her, how you would die small deaths together. your lower belly stirs with that same old desire. but it's time to go and you've things to do.
"see you around," you say, as your mind moves on to other things. like paperwork and the electric bill and tomorrow's date with anya, or whatever name her mother gave her in slovenia.
you turn away from 6:45, the bus stop, tuesday. and the world, ironic as it is, happens right behind your back—melting into a der blaue reiter kandinksy all around you.
she gave you that book on abstract paintings, too. but then, come to think of it, she never really knew how to move you.
"how would i know?" he asked.
"you'd know. my hair, my eyes, my lips, my skin would make the world fall tenderly around you from two blocks away."
it's been years now, and the books she sent you had long tired themselves out making love with the dust bunnies under your bed. you've called her name more than a few times since, but only ended up waking the ghost of her imagined taste in your mouth. and you curse in english and a smattering of other languages you've picked up along the way. your tavern cursing always made her laugh.
it's six in the morning. time to walk her out of your system again. maybe you'll take that book on hentai she found so gloriously entertaining. you could never get that about her. but okay, you'll take her book out for some fresh air today.
you turn your collar up against the chill of old, familiar things. there's the baptist church. the school. the diner where you could always get them big-ass breakfasts. oh, the avenue with its hint of eternal autumn. and later, further on, the bus stop.
(you're dreading it already.)
"god, but my world is small," you say. and you gently finger the spine of the book in your hand as if it were her spine you were touching.
you don't know how to let go, really. every moment is marked with this and that of her. your best friend, probably with the best of intentions, says earnestly, "go out and fuck, man. i'd fix you up with somebody. you have to let me help you." as if you were some kind of crazy with no common sense to speak of. you don't tell him how you've fucked five different women in three days. all of them drop-dead gorgeous in their respective parts of the world. all of them not her. sure, it helped quiet the demons for a while.
anyway, here's the bus stop. here's where time stands still. for you, it would always be tuesday in these parts.
(bus 21892 boarding.)
and you think, maybe it'll be different today. maybe, you wouldn't let me walk by because you thought it would go nowhere. maybe you would make the world fall tenderly around me from two blocks away. or even from one block away. okay, how about half a block? don't make me grovel, sweetheart. please, don't. i can love you so much better than this.
and damn it, somebody manages to interrupt your sad little monologue. "may i have the time?"
you say, even without looking at your watch, "it's 6:45. well, i could be off for a few minutes or so, but i'm pretty sure that's accurate."
"thanks."
you look away from the beautiful stranger and turn your face up to the sky, that lovely blue suicide poem. you think of how you would lay her down under that sky, how you would take everything of her, how you would die small deaths together. your lower belly stirs with that same old desire. but it's time to go and you've things to do.
"see you around," you say, as your mind moves on to other things. like paperwork and the electric bill and tomorrow's date with anya, or whatever name her mother gave her in slovenia.
you turn away from 6:45, the bus stop, tuesday. and the world, ironic as it is, happens right behind your back—melting into a der blaue reiter kandinksy all around you.
she gave you that book on abstract paintings, too. but then, come to think of it, she never really knew how to move you.
69 Comments
Close this window Collapse commentsfor you, carl. you had me at, "you're drifting. get a hold, beautiful writer."
9:18 PM
it's so beautiful...
if only it was as beautiful in the real world,than to see the ugliest side of the beauty in real..
if only...if only...
12:06 AM
i've found that, more often than not, hentai leads to paper cuts.
12:25 AM
I can "walk", meld into walls, out of the wind, slosh around buzzed, wrestle with threads of the music emanating through the prodigious reaches...but never will I get her out of my mind...you have this way of reaching into memory hidden away purposefully and drawing it out, the droves of it come and overwhelm.
12:53 AM
Ah. Sails back up I see.
And your movement through the water is majestic.
: )
12:58 AM
i might die
a little bit
each time
i think of
this
1:24 AM
she gave you that book on abstract paintings, too. but then, come to think of it, she never really knew how to move you.
I like this one. Can I keep it?
2:02 AM
Damn, tran. When do I get to read your book?
2:07 AM
such a precious post Trans! anything i could say would not be enough.... ma belle!!! ;-*
4:03 AM
i think other people have asked you this before... but are you planning on writing a book sometime?
5:11 AM
i live at the airport some days.
reliving the day i first met that one. took him home. it was nothing short of magic. why is it that something so torturously beautiful always has such a sad ending?
5:18 AM
Okay don't freak out but there are TWO Bunnies gathering dust behind my couch! They are stuffed and given to me by my husband's sister in law!
8:04 AM
I remember those butterflies flying around in my heart when I would revisit places and things shared with one no longer present.
The blue suicide poem is so strong an image thst it nails melancholy to his soul.
I would, were I him, leave a notch in the bench every day until she showed or the bench disappeared from my whittling. I would take the benches disappearance as a sign to get over it.
This is really nice stuff Trans.
Where the blues
stroke our hearts
we pay our dues
and create arts
ok it atleast ryhmes
peace
11:52 AM
to be so beautiful and then the realization
kudos dear tran
1:30 PM
it doesn't always end badly, sarah...
yeah, this one did all my senses. speechless. thankyou, little t.
3:45 PM
i feel nostalgic for some weird reason...
6:12 PM
so then, i find you creating yet another work of brilliance when in point of fact you should be chained to your PC writing words for the erotic site.
hmmm, must make a note to speak to our boss about this.
very beautiful this trans and strangely in tune with the blog pulse.
7:40 PM
wow, that was good!
i really felt for the guy...
hentai. really. :D
8:05 PM
transience, i think carl is right. drift, but only with the snow. the snow settles too, and creates beautiful scenery, new images and wonderful stories.
I know this sounds lame, but get yourself a book deal, girl!
8:29 PM
i must agree with you, dear. the world is indeed small.
and yet, the possibilities are endless.
9:10 PM
harem chicks do it at bus stops...i'm just saying..
9:51 PM
i'd stop the world and melt with you.....
11:54 PM
softly electric. it's an understatement, mind you. softly electric.
hentai, eh? oh, you always say the things which tickle my fancy.
2:00 AM
I'm more scared the bus arrives.
My shouts to an end, or beginning.
A loss most indefinite.
Leave the ones that are dear.
Only to find new pain.
No hope for me now.
Ease away to oblivion.
3:22 AM
'she never knew how to move me'
even if my animosity
struck a pose
indifference it would wear
'be' cause this beauty
that resides inside me
Picasso only dreamt of capturing'
Icy
Transience, You are that beauty if ya didn't already know. Your words are like a trip to the South Pacific on a cool spring day.
8:28 AM
that was quietly powerful. I've always known it was better to have never loved. than loved and lost.
xxB
9:38 AM
Reminds me of something a friend had written long ago: maybe you'll like it.
http://aimlesswanderer.livejournal.com/40043.html
Sonali
11:06 AM
i like the idea of a bus station. such places are transient places with people at neither their origins nor their destinations. bus stations are spaces of "in between" and middle worlds of existance.
1:01 PM
it looks like the person is a man...oh your comment elucidates it... anyways nice.. and thanks for your comments on my blog..appreciate it.c
cheers
z
1:47 PM
'that lovely blue suicide poem'... hit the switch, trans, thats cool. i like how your stuff is puzzling and ambiguous and changes with each reading. good work. it got me down, an instant before i realised i had no fags and no money and walked into the boiler. should call anya etc easy x
6:21 PM
There's a tranquil, dream-like quality to this work. She never knew how to move him, but made a powerful impression... She was doing something right...
10:29 PM
sometimes when I visit your blog,I feel like you'd make a wonderful girlfried.Don't get me wrong,not hitting on you..but the sublime quality in your writing is deeply attractive.A reminder of my trippy days..in a good way.
and yeah I always feel refreshed whenever I come here.Thanks.
11:00 PM
You write beautifully about the ugliest thing most people ever experience.
4:34 AM
You just introduced me to Kandinsky. I will now be up all night reading every website on the net about the dude.
Thank you!
9:31 AM
Whoa! The end of that story came as a shock to me, yet it was appropriate. And sad.
10:15 AM
you definitely know how to move me with this writing!!!! aahhh so bittersweet. so honest and raw. this was beautiful. i wish i could follow this stranger as he goes on living with this ghost.
amazing girl!!
1:20 PM
whew. rad!
1:27 PM
the bus, it was what color baby?
2:15 PM
really a fantastic post from your side..dat's all i can say..
Btw i'm just looking at your profile pic for a couple of mints..it's awesome!!
take care
3:33 PM
this website makes me feel like i'm in narnia...again. you kind of remind of salman rushdie style writing.
bjork rules. infact anyway with a silent jay in their name is badass.
4:22 PM
kandinsky. he makes me smile. i remember he was yours and dali was mine. both whimsical intellectuals. damn those men, they make us write about bus stops and pit stops and moving on too fast and too soon with sob stories in our backpacks, well, a swinging purse in your case. men, and their oil on canvass romancing.
5:26 PM
i think we all hate when ______ happens.
11:40 PM
Jackie left on a cold, dark night
Telling me he'd be home
Sailed the seas for a hundred years
Leaving me all alone
And I've been dead for twenty years
I've been washing the sand
With my ghostly tears
Searching the shores for my Jackie-oh
Jackie, Sinead O'Connor
Nice work T.
Cheers.
11:47 PM
Nice work. Very poetic...
2:03 AM
I rarely have the words to describe how your writing makes me feel. Beautiful.
7:04 AM
As usual, I'm awed I don't know what to say. :)
7:28 AM
I just love the Kandinksy! One more reason to keep dropping by here.
7:51 AM
You've outdone yourself with this post Transience. Congrats.
3:58 PM
Thank you for this.. I don't feel alone anymore! These words are worth more than ten years of therapy to me! I worship you Transience!
5:28 PM
beautiful writing.
10:19 PM
Do many people write about early morning thoughts? No T, still fewer people begin to think them until later in the day. We know what they're missing.
It's a while since I had a "big-ass" for breakfast!
10:54 PM
Three-quarters round, 6 times before found.
Kandinsky or Klee, wherefore art thee.
Night falls as blue suicide.
Clock's pleated cloak as Guggentide.
7:31 AM
Trans, can I get your password to wipe out the comments of these damn spammers that leave comments?
11:15 AM
everywhere's a bus stop when you're willing to wait.
3:37 PM
lovely lovely
3:08 AM
Beautiful stuff.
I'll probably have to go think about it, then return later tonight and creep up on it sideways, surprise the hidden meanings and grasp those gems that lurk between the lines.
8:58 PM
i really loved this.
2:14 PM
Never a dull moment reading your words Trans. :))
6:22 PM
..such a pleasure to be soaked back into the dark molasses of your words..
sigh..!
1:19 AM
Wow. Beautiful. I'm not sure there are words to describe... how moved I am by this post.
2:26 AM
Seriously, you should consider publishing a collection of short stories. I do not think this is the first time that you have received such encouragement, but you really should consider..
3:27 AM
I have a Kandinsky print on my wall - an early era one - it reminds me of something.
6:05 PM
I wish we could see the world with such attention to detail and beauty and pathos and drama, every single minute of every single day. But we can't. And so we make do with our regular fix of you, a marvellous addiction indeed. Too much, we'd overdose but you manage to feed us just enough happy and inspiring and thoughtful to keep us going. This was another wonderful piece. x
7:29 PM
once again, caught up in this anime picture of bold strokes and swift flowing lines, and big blue pools for the hero's silent eyes. i love this.
hentai fascinates me too.
7:40 PM
Fascinating! :]
2:42 AM
There's something beautifully terrifing about all this.
5:59 AM
wonderful as ever, trans.
i'd have to admit i'm not keeping my end up of this SMS-ing, YM-ing, email-ing, blog comment-ing thing that we have, and i am ashamed of it.
just so i don't bore you with my excuses, i'll really try to find time to SMS you again, and set up those coffee cups that never became.
i am around. now.
so i'll catch you later.
9:55 AM
YA BABY!!!
9:50 AM
i agree i've been absent in more ways than one. but i really do want to thank you all for pedaling up and leaving such insightful commentary. this entry is more a work of fiction than anything, but a few things, like the hentai, eternal autumn, beautiful strangers and kandinsky are all fascinations of mine. not that i can put any of those in my resumé, but there you go.
triplesix >> if onlys can be so beautiful and so damn frustrating.
jeremy >> you're not doing it correctly, then. here...lemme show you...
johnb >> me and my memories are intimate strangers. i suppose that's why i can let them in through my front door.
timeintotime >> look, everybody! it's carl!
and to you, my dear. i've no words to thank you.
blog this >> i totally understand.
n. missy >> my gift to you. =)
esotericwombat >> the pressure!
car@ >> *kisses*
kathleen >> it's in the works. but that's where it always stays, sadly. i know, i know. i need to step up. i'm getting there...watch me.
sarah >> because there are no happy endings.
mrsmogul >> LOL! really? how often does that even happen?
anonant >> you've described such painful melancholy, dear. that's the stuff poetry is made of, i hear.
alice: in wonderland or not >> you are sweetness itself. thank you.
ivar >> i like being your little everything. just saying.
sunset eyes >> don't we all? i think it's this month's affliction. heh. how are you, lil sis?
cocaine jesus >> i'm so sorry. i'm a horrible erotic writer. i have an excuse, though. some itch inside me seems to be missing, and without it, i can't be erotic. it's true. i've been looking under my bed forever for the missing itch.
claudzki >> i felt for him. and maybe for the girl, too. two people who knew nothing about the love they could give each other. and yes, hentai. definitely hentai.
trine >> you're not lame, honey. i am. and these days are my worst. but i appreciate your support. you must know that.
jey >> hell. i second that.
capegirl >> we definitely do.
mitzzee >> i'd whisk you away to my little island paradise.
corsarius >> so. which hentai tickles your fancy? =)
simple american >> ouch.
icylyrics >> that was fantastic. do that to me again, please.
b >> we're modern girls at heart. we are, we are. now pass me a chocolate bar for the pain.
sonali >> i liked it! it does read similarly, doesn't it? i appreciate the drive-by. take care.
illimitable voices >> i never thought of it that way. it's brilliant. the idea could inspire a totally different piece.
zofo >> yes, he's a man who has no idea. no idea.
benjamin >> you're back! ohmigod. i've missed you. pedal up again and i'll give you anya's number.
Ô¿Ô >> maybe he liked dali. i haven't worked that part out yet.
ashes >> thank you, dear. that was sweet and flattering of you to say. i would never get you wrong, you know.
miss jay >> wow. your words hit me spot on. thanks.
funky fresh freddie >> me love me some kandinsky. you're welcome. you're my bloke now.
maja >> nowadays, sadness always seems appropriate.
lorena >> some of us walk around ghosts without even knowing it. my schedule is monday. i'm always dead on a monday.
chris >> awesomerad, you mean. do it right. =)
monster spank >> what did you want it to be, sweetie?
gangadhar >> thanks on both.
guns'n'baddus >> hello, newcomer! everything you said tickles me. narnia, rushdie, bjork, badass. you just sang me a love song, you know.
bismuth >> we need to fucking meet.
violent haze >> so true.
ben >> how appropriate that was.
kerouaced >> mmmm. poetic.
kari >> your reaction leaves me in shivers, though. so the words are just icing. thank you, dear.
abaniko >> that's okay. we're still buddies.
ct >> i love him, too! but he was mine first, mind you.
kunstemaecker >> do i get a prize?
frap gurl >> and i you, sweet one.
rhein >> you're very kind. come by again, soon. i'd like that.
perfect virgo >> we do know, don't we? and if you ever come by the equator, your big-ass breakfast is on me.
protagoras >> that was a lovely play on words. refreshing commentary, as always. you should write again.
king of space >> no worries. i've wiped him out. but your territorial tendencies leave me breathless.
nizoral >> i fucking love that line. can i keep it?
blog ho >> you, too, times 42.
faltenin >> i hear that's the best way to catch certain things unawares. thanks for dropping by. it's always nice to meet new people going up north.
gusgreeper >> thanks, dearest.
blue athena >> i think i said the same thing to you! oooohhh, mutual love society! i adore it. =)
picushion >> mmmmmmmolasses.
Sk8RN >> you being here is enough for me.
brighter death >> no, it's not the first time. but i do appreciate all the encouragement.
RuKsaK >> a hamburger?
spicy cauldron >> why, oh, why does everything you say touch me so much? thanks, andy. you've lifted my spirits.
hera >> a kindred spirit. awesome.
carolvs >> thanks!
ygwin >> you know what? you could be right.
john >> shush. no excuses. just show me the money.
heh.
seriously, i missed you, too. anytime, you're free, bubba, i'm here.
mitzzee again >> i love you. you make me smile and laugh and cry and smile again.
11:22 AM
"how would i know?" he asked.
"you'd know. my hair, my eyes, my lips, my skin would make the world fall tenderly around you from two blocks away."
it's been years now, and the books she sent you had long tired themselves out making love with the dust bunnies under your bed. you've called her name more than a few times since, but only ended up waking the ghost of her imagined taste in your mouth. and you curse in english and a smattering of other languages you've picked up along the way. your tavern cursing always made her laugh.
it's six in the morning. time to walk her out of your system again. maybe you'll take that book on hentai she found so gloriously entertaining. you could never get that about her. but okay, you'll take her book out for some fresh air today.
you turn your collar up against the chill of old, familiar things. there's the baptist church. the school. the diner where you could always get them big-ass breakfasts. oh, the avenue with its hint of eternal autumn. and later, further on, the bus stop.
(you're dreading it already.)
"god, but my world is small," you say. and you gently finger the spine of the book in your hand as if it were her spine you were touching.
you don't know how to let go, really. every moment is marked with this and that of her. your best friend, probably with the best of intentions, says earnestly, "go out and fuck, man. i'd fix you up with somebody. you have to let me help you." as if you were some kind of crazy with no common sense to speak of. you don't tell him how you've fucked five different women in three days. all of them drop-dead gorgeous in their respective parts of the world. all of them not her. sure, it helped quiet the demons for a while.
anyway, here's the bus stop. here's where time stands still. for you, it would always be tuesday in these parts.
(bus 21892 boarding.)
and you think, maybe it'll be different today. maybe, you wouldn't let me walk by because you thought it would go nowhere. maybe you would make the world fall tenderly around me from two blocks away. or even from one block away. okay, how about half a block? don't make me grovel, sweetheart. please, don't. i can love you so much better than this.
and damn it, somebody manages to interrupt your sad little monologue. "may i have the time?"
you say, even without looking at your watch, "it's 6:45. well, i could be off for a few minutes or so, but i'm pretty sure that's accurate."
"thanks."
you look away from the beautiful stranger and turn your face up to the sky, that lovely blue suicide poem. you think of how you would lay her down under that sky, how you would take everything of her, how you would die small deaths together. your lower belly stirs with that same old desire. but it's time to go and you've things to do.
"see you around," you say, as your mind moves on to other things. like paperwork and the electric bill and tomorrow's date with anya, or whatever name her mother gave her in slovenia.
you turn away from 6:45, the bus stop, tuesday. and the world, ironic as it is, happens right behind your back—melting into a der blaue reiter kandinksy all around you.
she gave you that book on abstract paintings, too. but then, come to think of it, she never really knew how to move you.
posted by transience at 8:35 PM on Jan 29, 2006